Monday, 29 February 2016

the cat at the beach

It was a beautiful sunny day to spend at the beach. Jack the cat was relaxing on the hot white sand. His master was paddling in the refreshing crystal water, when suddenly his friend Byron came along. He was looking very sorry for himself.

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‘’Why the long Face’’ said Jack because my friend kick me on the leg  so can you help me please because my leg is so sour.  my friend is so sad because my friend as no food .so then my friends and jack  went fishing.

Then Byron came and push me into the water and got cut from the rock and the jack came and help him and then Byron was friend with jack.

and it was a hot day  so they went for a swim together at the beach and then they went to go look for so fish for their food .then they live happily ever after .

                                                              THE END  
by samantha



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